Thursday, 29 September 2011

The Silk scarf

Setting in time:During Apartheid era , summer time
Setting in place:South Africa,Oriental Plaza in Johannesburg

Main characters

Mrs Nebo
She is a wife of an important official of the Afican front.
She is of medium height with heavy loins and smooth-skinned complexion.
Mrs Nebo lived in the white Suburb of Houghton.
Mrs Nebo is full of herself  and like showing of,she was tring to answer  Mr Sakur badly and she was trying to put him down.
Mrs Nebo had a disgreenent with Mr Sakur because she wanted to buy a silk scarf but she had no enough cash.  Mrs  Nebo wanted to buy with a cheque which was profibited in Mr Sakur 's shop.

Mr Sakur
He is an Indian man.
He was so sturbborn.
Mr Sakur is a short  gaunt-looking man.
Mr Sakur had a serious dispute with Mrs Nebo.
Mr Sakur did not have mercy and he was running his shop in his own way.

The plot
 The story is about  a wife of an important official of the African front.Her name is Mrs Nebo and her husband  was Mr Nebo.Mrs Nebo had a fiend called Margarent.Mrs Nebo like expensive items and showing off.One day they went for shopping with a friend Margarent.She bought a dress and she was hunting for scarf that will suit her dress.They went in Moghul Boutique were she found her matching silk scarf.Mrs Nebo did not have enough cash with her instead  she wanted to give a cheque to Mr Sakur,but he refused.This issue caused dispute between her and Mr Sakur.People who were close heard Mrs Nebo and Mr Sakur arguing and they came to hear what was going on.The traders of Moghul Boutique bought the  scarf  for Mr Nebo and gave it to her as a present.She smiled happily after receiving the scarf.

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  2. 6/10. Enough sentences and correct information. You have words that you spelt wrong and the grammar was not good too.

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